Voice test for a mod

It would be nice to receive some input on my English as this is not my primary language. (though they are short xD)

What do you fellas think about the result in the end?

At least my new microphone works as it should, no noise and perfect sound ^^

Original
My voice_original.mp3(click me)

Test
My Voice_test.mp3(click me too)

Too bad the links don't work.

Hmmm, something must be wrong with permissions, works like a charm here

EDIT:::
It was set to allow outside users, but reseted the whole thing. Try again >.<''

Now they work. Your English is pretty solid, but I'd slow down a bit. On some words your accent is really thick, slowing down a bit would help.

I'll keep that in mind.

Most Norwegians sounds like Petter Solberg, believe it or not its a fact hehe

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PoF7QBymXzc

w/o being the expert or having english as native language i think that it sounds really good

Sounds good to me.

Sounds fineeee

kwl

you sound like a typical swe OMG

some of it sounds english, but people that are english can tell its a foreigner saying it. your saying it in a dull tone. i know its supposed to sound serious tho

It won't be to important, it's an ambient sound which will be mixed with sound effects and music. Still want to do it as good as possible though.

It's the not-word that makes it look foreign to me.. really small word but yet hard to speak it in prefect english. And as emilio says, sweden like.
What you want to do is speak it differently then what it says. No not but nawt.
Sounds strange, but try it.
Unless you want to speak british, then you should express it more

Crow wrote:It's the not-word that makes it look foreign to me..

Agreed.

I'm sure this should sounds good in the contest of the mod.
Gg, Xav!

there is something wrong with the not yeh
maybe it helps to paste it to the A ?
like: "this is noda drill"
I dunno rly