Lyrics

Here is my new lyric for my band, please comment it, tell me ur opinion, even if it's bad or it's good

When I first saw your beautifull face
I did realize only thing in your eyes
They way you looked at my with it
Made my useless heart beat
I didn't see through a senseless heart
A lost sole that I wanted to heal
For kiss that I used to get
It seemed like 10 more minutes into my life
But now I see that all are just memories
What I like to keep in my shallow mind.


I didn't want this to happen
But I was to damn careless
I did hurt you heart a few times
But didn't ment to do it honestly
I did feel for you and I still do
But now I can reach the things I did back then
I'm sorry, that's all that I can say
But I can do more if you let me back there

I don't know why I had that feeling
But I can't forget the feelings of sickness
I did watch the rain and felt the pain
I did so much to have you back in my care
I will always keep this empty space next to me
Like if it's very important and saint for me
You won't be always searching,you won't be alone
I will be always in your heart where I will love you
I won't get out of this depressive mood for you
Because I can't live with out you!!!

I didn't want this to happen
But I was to damn careless
I did hurt you heart a few times
But didn't ment to do it honestly
I did feel for you and I still do
But now I can reach the things I did back then
I'm sorry, that's all that I can say
But I can do more if you let me back there

good job huni

u r kinda in an inspiration mood the last days XD
nice lyrics again
keep it up

nice, ah pitty I live in Holland and can't join ya band =P

Thanks guys, but I still have to decide, which part will be singed by me, and which one would be screamed byt the other singer aka Pista, by best friend in real life

Those are absolutely lovely lyrics!
Some grammatical correction and checking for possible typos and it's good to go!

Very nice job, Hunor!

*Hule* wrote:
Some grammatical correction and checking for possible typos and it's good to go!

I'm kinda lazy to do it

RepTile wrote:

*Hule* wrote:
Some grammatical correction and checking for possible typos and it's good to go!

I'm kinda lazy to do it

I can believe.

Of course because it's song lyrics we're talking about, those typos and grammatical errors don't matter that much.

Well yeah, the quality of the music, that matters

Good Job mate,I hope the music will own too

that sucks you emo punk

nah gj

~Aragorn~ wrote:that sucks you emo punk

nah gj

XD, yeah I'm emo, but don't care if they don't like it, and no I'm not a punk, I'n an hyperactive emo punk